Wednesday, October 25: Revise & Proofread Your Narrative

Goals: Set goals for revision. Add descriptive language to help readers visualize. Add transitions to help readers summarize. Proofread for errors.

Announcements:

• DUE TODAY: Flocabulary: Using Descriptive Language (10 points)
• PAT time?
• New seats tomorrow. Send me a message if you have a special consideration.
• Absent yesterday? Log in to Flocabulary.com and complete Using Descriptive Language assignment

Writing Workshop

1. Revise and Proofread Your Narrative (Steps 1 to 4) :

   •  Open Draft Your Narrative from Google Drive.
   • Use the Revise and Publish in 5 Steps handout to guide your work today.
   • Check off each item as you complete it.
   • Complete steps 1 to 4 today.

2. If you finish steps 1 to 4—

   • Congratulations! You are ready to publish.
   • Follow the directions for step 5: Publish Your Draft to NEO. For a video tutorial, click here.

3. Choose from “What to Do When You Are Done” (right sidebar)

Homework: Read. Charge iPad. Finish Revise and Publish (Steps 1 to 4)